The wind took away the words,
leaving a lisp,
for me to work out from her lips.
her eyes close to mine veiled the sea,
the sun sinking to hide the bare shores,
the silken claws of night breached the deeps,
the waves slitting down the pensive heaves,
shrubs flowered in the nocturne,
drunk with a sensuous cologne,
clouds cloaked a meddling moon.
words this time clung like a moan,
making the roar of the raging sea,to drown.
the hills closed in,
and the skies fell over our remnants,
with a few shells on the rim.
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8 Reply to "the amorous nature"
gerry boyd on January 4, 2010 at 7:23 AM
This is rich and lush. Enjoyed very much. Thanks.
Stan Ski on January 4, 2010 at 9:45 AM
The view from my window!
Linda Jacobs on January 4, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Delightful descriptions!
Srikumaran Menon on January 6, 2010 at 3:49 AM
Deep and meaningful words springing out from the heart...great writing.....
Unknown on January 15, 2010 at 9:21 PM
could visualize the whole scenario crystal clear. well described & excellent writing...thanx
Sasidharan Cheruvattath on January 17, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Thank all of you for the compliments.
Sadia on January 19, 2010 at 4:51 AM
As always beautifully written! I deeply admire your talent to etch your thoughts so brilliantly!
Take care Shashi and wish you a great New Year.
matt at shadow of iris on April 2, 2010 at 3:17 AM
I feel as if I were there, thank you.
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