A Depraved Night’s Anecdote (4)

8:14 AM by shashi dhar , under


Stealth walked on your carpet,
tripped over threadbare deceits,
swept under.
thieving night light winked,
at you, wearing jaded genes.
wicked excitement beamed
through windows of decadence,
with indulgent mischief,
as sneaking pleasure got entrapped.



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4 Reply to "A Depraved Night’s Anecdote"

gel on October 12, 2009 at 12:48 AM

I like this a lot, especially the personification "thieving night winked." Great photo, too. Did you shoot that? (I'm here from poetry train.)

 

Vita Stunder on October 12, 2009 at 8:10 AM

I look forward to see your new poems every time!
You SHINE!

Keep shining :)
Anna

 

gautami tripathy on October 12, 2009 at 8:39 AM

Loved the descriptions about the night.

honeyed glow

 

aila on October 13, 2009 at 7:34 PM

"as sneaking pleasure got entrapped."
lively put! i enjoyed reading this poem. thanks a lot for sharing!